
Too much people can make a lot of money in the world. I’m not poor, but I’m not a rich man in China. Money isn't everything, but A man without money is no man at all. I wanted to buy a diamond ring for my love when I’m in love, I wanted to buy a house for my wife when I’m marry , I did that all, a lot of thing I wanted to do for my family if I make enough money. If I won $10 million dollars, I will give my family the best life, anything they want. Also I will have my business, it’s make more money. Everyone likes money, some rich man make themselves niggard. I think who need to do good and accumulate merit, make you family and friends happy, give something back to my community. Don’t likes a An obdurate miser. Money is not wrong, you need to think how to use it.
You're right, money isn't everything, but nobody wants to be poor! We just need enough money to be satisfied.
ReplyDeleteCorrections: "If I won $10 million, I would give my family the best life..." (use "would" because it's not a real situation) Also, the words "niggard" and "obdurate miser" sound strange and old-fashioned - did you find them in a dictionary? Maybe it's better to use "stingy" or "cheapskate".